Wednesday, July 07, 2004 AD An Editing Challenge It's hard to edit writing when you're not sure whether or not it's gibberish:
"Develop initial cost-benefit analysis and research to define and validate opportunities, and prioritize the impact of the change efforts."
I know what "Develop initial cost-benefit analysis and research" means (and suspect that it would be better to put the research before the analysis), but I'm lost beyond that. Considering the general quality of the writing in the rest of the document (a job description), I'm highly dubious regarding the comprehensibility of this sentence. Can anyone explain it to me? Posted by Valerie (Kyriosity) at 7/07/2004 11:48:00 AM
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